First off, no need to write so aggressively—your keyboard deserves a little love too, you know! Then, doesn’t it occur to you that this might just be a translation issue or a simple typo? Is it really that critical to nitpick something so common in post-apocalyptic settings when we all understand it’s about volume, not surface area?

As for saying the author lives in a "mommy basement," I’d bet it’s more likely you’re the one in a cave. The story takes place in China, where some cities are massively overpopulated, so gathering 5,000 people that quickly isn’t exactly far-fetched.

Oh, and about his ex? She hasn’t yet tried to kill him again, but it’s pretty obvious that’s just her style—it’s bound to happen sooner or later. I mean, her first reaction to call him trash instead of being shocked at her boyfriend’s actions says it all, doesn’t it?

That said, yeah, I’ll admit—the story overall is pretty bad. But hey, let’s try to critique with a touch more finesse, shall we?