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Buty roseRocks on  Fighting Ward
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NeverWhereSucks big time on  What Happens When the Substitute Driver is Single
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KeilMeh on  The Weight of Accumulated Snow
They twinkified him lmao, the story is mid tbh
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NadriosMeh on  How to Retire as a Disaster Necromancer
"I mean it´s alright" ... beside the ending, the ending is bad
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ASDFGHJKL Pretty good on  I Think I've Been Possessed Somewhere
Truthfully, there were dozens of plot holes. The fl is so oblivious and the story had some VERY rushed moments. But it was such a fun read. It wasn't  heavy and while there was backstory it wasn't difficult to keep along with. And even though she got with the ml at the most random moment I could care less. Her obliviousness would be so annoying on any other fl but for her it kind of just worked because she was so wrapped up in her head lmao. The characters have similar roles but don't overlap. I aprecaite the fl having an overpowered power in moderation. I hate when fls desperately think they need the power to survive even if the ml is right there protecting them too. It's typically difficult seeing a fl learn how to defend herself because of how cringey it is. But it was nice how all of the female characters could hold their own and even the fl learning something small and within story boundaries for herself (yk without randomly giving her the swordsmanship skills of the century on top of having wishes. The sister and peria didn't overlap either because the sister had knowledge from prior and peria herself worked hard with her outstanding talent
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savage ukkoSucks big time on  Nee Nee. Ano ne
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NeverWhereSucks big time on  Anatatachi Soredemo Sensei desu ka!
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NeverWhereSucks big time on  Holy Pilgrimage Ecstasy
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PurrpiTatorKinda bad on  Secret Contract With The Black Duke
Idiot goody 2 shoes FL. And her family.

It feels like the author was afriad to have any depth. All the plot "twists" are predicatble, with almost immediate, and weak payoff. Pacing of this short story is break-neck, and there is no real investment in the side characters.

She supposedly has so many siblings that she loves. 30 chapters in, we have not met one of them. They are at most, nondescript background characters whenever the plot is hijacking the limelight.

I havent seen any substantive planning done by the fl in any conflic as it arises. In fact one of her plans just invilved, being "as nice as always." 

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Its just weak. If you want something short and whimsical, its fine enough. Pretty even, if you dont mind reused assets.

But its nothing to look forward to.
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yayaRocks on  The Moon-Painting Alchemist
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RilkaSucks big time on  It Starts with Isaac
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Manga123Rocks on  To Tone Down the Gangster Male Lead
This is sooo good I love it
Please give us more chapters this is the best I ever readed.
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RubyRocks on  A Young Master
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NeverWhereSucks big time on  Between the Doors
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NeverWhereSucks big time on  Place to Be
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chaudcacao abricotan...Pretty good on  Kaijin Reijou
Hilarious but degenerates are welcome. World famous serial killers such as jason, freddy and co left artifacts after being subdued and used by a secret military unit.

Intense emotions when peaking turn random japanese into kaijin out of frustration. Even in the opening chapter an internet user than tried hard to get like, lol on his comments went berserk because no one would approve his efforts.
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NeverWhereSucks big time on  Clone
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